Date: September 25, 2007 12:14:39 pm Title: A Child's Thoughts
You know, this is just another time that you prove how much more better at writing you are. Not that I condemn you for it. This is damn good, man, damn good.
[Report This]Date: July 21, 2007 05:27:28 pm Title: A Child's Thoughts
nice...a really well designed plot, as well as being well excecuted. some grammer errors and a bit of ill-timed (but not neccisarily bad) humor, but other then that quite good.
-IsaacLives
Oh wait-you read 'who will hear you scream', didn't you? well, if you did, it's finished now, so come on by and learn how the story concludes. (everything was fine till alex started playing with gravity...)
[Report This]Date: March 04, 2006 04:20:18 pm Title: A Child's Thoughts
Wow!! Finally a story on this site worth reading, no offenes to the others but this blows them out of the water.......you should write a sequel to lost age it would probably be amazing
Author's Response: Haha, thanks, though I've seen plenty of other good fics here. And I'm working on the sequel. =D Check out Pleiades.