Date: July 21, 2007 05:27:28 pm Title: A Child's Thoughts
nice...a really well designed plot, as well as being well excecuted. some grammer errors and a bit of ill-timed (but not neccisarily bad) humor, but other then that quite good.
Oh wait-you read 'who will hear you scream', didn't you? well, if you did, it's finished now, so come on by and learn how the story concludes. (everything was fine till alex started playing with gravity...)
Date: March 04, 2006 04:20:18 pm Title: A Child's Thoughts
Wow!! Finally a story on this site worth reading, no offenes to the others but this blows them out of the water.......you should write a sequel to lost age it would probably be amazing
Author's Response: Haha, thanks, though I've seen plenty of other good fics here. And I'm working on the sequel. =D Check out Pleiades.